Hello Ladies and Gentlemen,
This is the first input for me into the pages of this respectful forum. What I would like to share with you is few words that I wrote during my visit to Canada back in October – November 2002. The visit was for few weeks in which I experienced a lot of conflicting feelings. One of those feeling was the dispute between the eastern and the western different civilization. However, the most overwhelming feeling was missing home and friends. So, I started during that visit to compose few verses entitled “Home Sick” to express my thoughts in that overseas trip.

To brief you guys, I’d like to let you go strait forward through the following lines which outline my experience and exposure to the artificial western culture.

Ganes Al-Akbari
November 2nd, 2002
Canada, North America

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة العكبري (المشاركة 322693) HOME SICK No feather or wings, but still can survive to fly Passion and longing always wings me up to the sky Trust you! But less you see the glitter in my eye It is over! I will no longer struggle to shatter or die Let the ocean be frozen! I’ll never repeat the try Where else I dwell in, it is in vain for me to glorify Back home! Warm I in my tent, no cold or even dry Only my tent when I miss! makes me deeply cry

Mr. Ganes
Really wonderful poem
I am, and every emigrant, living these emotions everyday
Missing home
family
friends

I read your poem many many times
Whenever a person can go, he still (passionately) attached to his home, friends, memories

Accept my admiration of the piece of art you posted

Pls show your hidden treasures

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة العكبري (المشاركة 322693) Hello Ladies and Gentlemen, This is the first input for me into the pages of this respectful forum. What I would like to share with you is few words that I wrote during my visit to Canada back in October – November 2002. The visit was for few weeks in which I experienced a lot of conflicting feelings. One of those feeling was the dispute between the eastern and the western different civilization. However, the most overwhelming feeling was missing home and friends. So, I started during that visit to compose few verses entitled “Home Sick” to express my thoughts in that overseas trip. To brief you guys, I’d like to let you go strait forward through the following lines which outline my experience and exposure to the artificial western culture. HOME SICK No feather or wings, but still can survive to fly Passion and longing always wings me up to the sky Trust you! But less you see the glitter in my eye It is over! I will no longer struggle to shatter or die Let the ocean be frozen! I’ll never repeat the try Where else I dwell in, it is in vain for me to glorify Back home! Warm I in my tent, no cold or even dry Only my tent when I miss! makes me deeply cry Ganes Al-Akbari November 2nd, 2002 Canada, North America

I felt deeply touched by your poem because it reflected some how what I feel
your words is not just normal words for me..It is much more than that and beyond your imagination
many thanks.

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الماسه* (المشاركة 324650) Mr Al-akbari I felt deeply touched by your poem because it reflected some how what I feel your words is not just normal words for me..It is much more than that and beyond your imagination many thanks.

Dear Al-Masah

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة قاهر الظلام (المشاركة 324236) مشكور يااستاذ العكبري جميل ان تكتب باللغتين اين هم الشعراء من هذا الابداع المزدوج ماشاء الله..