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قديم 02-27-2009, 08:55 AM   #8
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Hello Ladies and Gentlemen,
This is the first input for me into the pages of this respectful forum. What I would like to share with you is few words that I wrote during my visit to Canada back in October – November 2002. The visit was for few weeks in which I experienced a lot of conflicting feelings. One of those feeling was the dispute between the eastern and the western different civilization. However, the most overwhelming feeling was missing home and friends. So, I started during that visit to compose few verses entitled “Home Sick” to express my thoughts in that overseas trip.

To brief you guys, I’d like to let you go strait forward through the following lines which outline my experience and exposure to the artificial western culture.



HOME SICK





No feather or wings, but still can survive to fly


Passion and longing always wings me up to the sky



Trust you! But less you see the glitter in my eye



It is over! I will no longer struggle to shatter or die



Let the ocean be frozen! I’ll never repeat the try



Where else I dwell in, it is in vain for me to glorify



Back home! Warm I in my tent, no cold or even dry



Only my tent when I miss! makes me deeply cry




Ganes Al-Akbari

November 2nd, 2002

Canada, North America



Mr Al-akbari

I felt deeply touched by your poem because it reflected some how what I feel
your words is not just normal words for me..It is much more than that and beyond your imagination
many thanks.
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