HOME SICK

[العكبري]

Hello Ladies and Gentlemen,
This is the first input for me into the pages of this respectful forum. What I would like to share with you is few words that I wrote during my visit to Canada back in October – November 2002. The visit was for few weeks in which I experienced a lot of conflicting feelings. One of those feeling was the dispute between the eastern and the western different civilization. However, the most overwhelming feeling was missing home and friends. So, I started during that visit to compose few verses entitled “Home Sick” to express my thoughts in that overseas trip.

To brief you guys, I’d like to let you go strait forward through the following lines which outline my experience and exposure to the artificial western culture.

	HOME SICK No feather or wings, but still can survive to fly Passion and longing always wings me up to the sky Trust you! But less you see the glitter in my eye It is over! I will no longer struggle to shatter or die Let the ocean be frozen! I’ll never repeat the try Where else I dwell in, it is in vain for me to glorify Back home! Warm I in my tent, no cold or even dry Only my tent when I miss! makes me deeply cry

Ganes Al-Akbari
November 2nd, 2002
Canada, North America

[حضرمي العز]

سلام من الحضرمي العز للجميع

[العكبري]

I highly appreciate your comments Mr Hadhrami

[قاهر الظلام]

مشكور يااستاذ العكبري جميل ان تكتب باللغتين
اين هم الشعراء من هذا الابداع المزدوج
ماشاء الله..

[العكبري]

اقتباس : المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة قاهر الظلام [ مشاهدة المشاركة ]

مشكور يااستاذ العكبري جميل ان تكتب باللغتين اين هم الشعراء من هذا الابداع المزدوج ماشاء الله..

قاهر الظلام
مشكور عزيزي على هذا التشجيع والمرور الرائع

[fahtoot2000]

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم
ماشاء الله خلصت القوافي العربيه
لكن في الاخير اهنيك على هذا الابداع الجميل
كلام رايع الله يزيدك قوه THANK YOU
FAHTOOOOOOOOOOT

[العكبري]

اقتباس : المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة fahtoot2000 [ مشاهدة المشاركة ]

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم ماشاء الله خلصت القوافي العربيه لكن في الاخير اهنيك على هذا الابداع الجميل كلام رايع الله يزيدك قوه THANK YOU FAHTOOOOOOOOOOT

Thanks a million Mr. Fahtoot.
I hope to see our paths cross together again.

[المـــــري]

Wonderful and beautiful words it's reflect the owner's. awesome poem at the same time; I choose these words as a gift to all members of this prestigious forum (One night my heart asked my eyes : why are you crying? my eyrs said Im looking for my friend and i cant find him . my heart said , dont cry he is inside me .)

[العكبري]

اقتباس : المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة المـــــري [ مشاهدة المشاركة ]

Wonderful and beautiful words it's reflect the owner's. awesome poem at the same time; I choose these words as a gift to all members of this prestigious forum (One night my heart asked my eyes : why are you crying? my eyrs said Im looking for my friend and i cant find him . my heart said , dont cry he is inside me .)

Thank you dear, I'm pleased to see your finger prints on my page.

Also, special thanks for the wonderful thoughts you shared with us through the dialogue that went on between your heart & your eyes

cheers

[عبدالله شعيب]

اقتباس : المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة العكبري [ مشاهدة المشاركة ]

HOME SICK No feather or wings, but still can survive to fly Passion and longing always wings me up to the sky Trust you! But less you see the glitter in my eye It is over! I will no longer struggle to shatter or die Let the ocean be frozen! I’ll never repeat the try Where else I dwell in, it is in vain for me to glorify Back home! Warm I in my tent, no cold or even dry Only my tent when I miss! makes me deeply cry

Mr. Ganes
Really wonderful poem
I am, and every emigrant, living these emotions everyday
Missing home
family
friends

I read your poem many many times
Whenever a person can go, he still (passionately) attached to his home, friends, memories

Accept my admiration of the piece of art you posted

Pls show your hidden treasures