02-22-2009, 12:17 PM | #1 | ||||||||||||||||
قانص
|
HOME SICK
Hello Ladies and Gentlemen, This is the first input for me into the pages of this respectful forum. What I would like to share with you is few words that I wrote during my visit to Canada back in October – November 2002. The visit was for few weeks in which I experienced a lot of conflicting feelings. One of those feeling was the dispute between the eastern and the western different civilization. However, the most overwhelming feeling was missing home and friends. So, I started during that visit to compose few verses entitled “Home Sick” to express my thoughts in that overseas trip. To brief you guys, I’d like to let you go strait forward through the following lines which outline my experience and exposure to the artificial western culture.
Ganes Al-Akbari
November 2nd, 2002 Canada, North America |
||||||||||||||||
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة العكبري ; 02-22-2009 الساعة 12:19 PM سبب آخر: Revision |
|||||||||||||||||
02-22-2009, 07:40 PM | #2 | |||||
حال جديد
|
سلام من الحضرمي العز للجميع
|
|||||
02-25-2009, 08:22 PM | #3 | |||||||
قانص
|
I highly appreciate your comments Mr Hadhrami
|
|||||||
02-26-2009, 01:33 AM | #4 | |||||
شاعرة السقيفه
|
[
على العموم انا متأكده من شيء واحد فقط هو اننا وقعنا على كنز ماشاء الله لاقوة الا بالله شاعر باللغه العربيه وباللغه الانجليزيه وجودة كلمات القصيده باللغه الانجليزيه لاتقل عن روعتها باللغه العربيه!!
|
|||||
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة عبدالله شعيب ; 02-28-2009 الساعة 12:27 PM سبب آخر: Some words refers to a deleted post |
||||||
02-26-2009, 02:34 AM | #5 | |||||
حال جديد
|
مشكور يااستاذ العكبري جميل ان تكتب باللغتين
اين هم الشعراء من هذا الابداع المزدوج ماشاء الله.. |
|||||
02-26-2009, 10:23 AM | #6 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
حال متالّق
|
Mr. Ganes Really wonderful poem I am, and every emigrant, living these emotions everyday Missing home family friends I read your poem many many times Whenever a person can go, he still (passionately) attached to his home, friends, memories Accept my admiration of the piece of art you posted Pls show your hidden treasures |
|||||||||||||||||||||||||||
02-26-2009, 07:01 PM | #7 | |||||||
قانص
|
Mr Abdulla,
Special thanks for the warm comments which make me feel proud of such praise especially when it comes from person like you that absolutely have a sophisticated and solid background in English Language Your comments reflects your professionalism and gives me a valid reason to keep in touch with such a smart people like you |
|||||||
02-27-2009, 08:55 AM | #8 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
شاعرة السقيفه
|
Mr Al-akbari I felt deeply touched by your poem because it reflected some how what I feel
your words is not just normal words for me..It is much more than that and beyond your imagination many thanks. |
|||||||||||||||||||||||||
02-27-2009, 11:37 AM | #9 | |||||||||
قانص
|
Dear Al-Masah ,I’m very pleased to hear these good expressions from you and honestly feel glad to have been able to touch your thoughts through the feelings and emotions that I had depicted in my poem. For sure, your comments will encourage me to continue to do my best so as to meet your expectations and the satisfaction of all members of this English Forum. Also, special thanks for the nice gesture by editing the format of the poem and making it look better. The poem now is occupying more space in the forum net due to your magic fingers Please don’t worry about the query that I raised in response to the comments provided by Afaf, I was just kidding and trying to add a sense of humor to the subject. بصراحة عفاف لو قالت وااااااه بالحضرمي بتكون أحلى بكثير من وااااو حق النصارى!!! ههههههههه
|
|||||||||
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة العكبري ; 02-27-2009 الساعة 11:49 AM |
||||||||||
02-28-2009, 07:07 AM | #10 | |||||||||
قانص
|
قاهر الظلام
مشكور عزيزي على هذا التشجيع والمرور الرائع |
|||||||||
مواقع النشر (المفضلة) |
|
|
|